You should keep on writing. It seems you have a lot to say...
When I read your story I came up with the tought that loneliness is a kind of an art… People should learn to love themselves more.
I have felt less loney during the lockdown, because I know there are a lot more lonely souls out there feeling the same way as I do.
But I wonder why your pictures are so stretched? If you copy the story from another editor strange things happen sometimes. Try this… First you write the title of your story in “new story”— then the sub title if any — then insert the picture — if you copy the story from the editor without pictures after these steps — I am quite sure it will look better.
Hope you keep on taking good care.