Thanks! I found a couple that was not in my original, and I deleted a few repeating lines. There is a spelling control here always trying to make suggestions, and sometimes I find words in the text I never wrote. I hate it…
I thought there was a curator to look through my story, and teach me how the publishing here works and how to get attention so people read about this idea.
The reasons I did not highlight text is I want people to read the whole story slowly and understand the idea. Maybe I should rethink my reason. My plan was to come back with an update 8.0.1 later if improvements comes up.
I had a “reader” commenting my story as utopia, and he asked critical questions about how to do this and that. I told him he did not read my story, and answered his questions. All of his questions was explained in the story. Embarassing for him it was, and then he deleted his own response.